I’m feeling a bit encouraged about progress on False Perceptions today. The disassembled chapter from last week was partially done. I’d gone through much of the grammar before and rearranged the scenes, but really couldn’t think through refreshing the transitions to reflect the new locations. It wasn’t as bad as I feared, and I was done in decent enough time to tackle the next chapter as well.
This one was labeled with big asterisks and the words FAULTY LOGIC, needs MUCH work, so my heart sank a little at turning to that page. Then I remembered that I’d already eliminated the faultiest part of the logic line from earlier chapters and things were holding up just fine without it. Even MORE logically! LOL. Anyway, got that chapter whipped into some sort of shape as well.
And still had time to do a fair chunk of reading on Maripat’s novel which she FINALLY emailed me for critiquing yesterday. It is laugh-out-loud funny in places and I think it will be a pleasure to crit.