I got a decent start on Tempest today: 1565 words and a complete scene. Actually I deleted the first 250 or so words and started over, deciding to introduce two other characters a bit further in. Four seemed too many for the opening scene, and left Tempest narrating instead of engaging. So now we’re starting with Cadence in tears and Tempest trying to comfort her, when what she really wants to do is rail at the injustices in their lives. Trust me, Tempest’s story is not going to be a ball of joy. There is a LOT of injustice in her little world. I’m actively looking for places to lighten it a bit along the way, but it’s a tough story. I’m not sure why this one called to me so insistently. I’ll likely find out.
Tempest’s basic need is for safety and security, so I guess that tells you what isn’t in her life at the beginning. But she’s strong. She’s a survivor. And unlike some characters who stand there wringing their hands at what the writer is planning to do to them next, Tempest is all about me bringing it on so that she can get to the other side and her happy ending.
So we’ve started. I’ll try updating my progress in the sidebar, so keep an eye!